Hooks · Electronics shops

Opening lines that stop the scroll for electronics shops

Lead with the monthly instalment or the service date, never with a product photo. Every shop on the road has the same model within two thousand rupees, so the hook has to be installation, warranty or the qist figure. Most shops post a brochure image and nothing else.

15 hooks you can use today

Each one says when to reach for it. Swap in your own numbers and area names.

01
“How much is the monthly instalment? It is on screen.”
“Qist kitni banti hai? Number screen pe likha hua hai.”
The weekly instalment card that stops fifty counter questions a day.
02
“Same fridge, same price, four shops. Ask about installation.”
“Wohi fridge, wohi rate, chaar dukanein — installation ka poochein.”
When a buyer is walking Bank Road comparing on price alone.
03
“Service your AC in March. In May nobody comes.”
“AC March mein service karwa lein, May mein koi technician nahi milta.”
First two weeks of March, before the servicing rush begins.
04
“Down payment, twelve months, eighteen months. All three figures.”
“Down payment, barah mahine, atharah mahine — teenon figure yahan hain.”
Instalment comparison post for one model on a payday week.
05
“Bring your CNIC and one electricity bill. That is all.”
“Shanakhti card aur ek bijli ka bill le aayen, bas itna hi.”
Answering the paperwork question that puts salaried buyers off.
06
“It is not cooling. It probably needs gas, not replacing.”
“Thanda nahi kar raha? Shayad gas chahiye, naya AC nahi.”
First hot week of the year, when panic replacement calls start.
07
“This UPS ran four fans and six lights for five hours.”
“Is UPS ne chaar pankhe aur chhe bulb paanch ghante chalaye.”
Load-shedding season, explained in fans and lights instead of watts.
08
“Complaint on Monday. Unit running by Thursday. Here is proof.”
“Peer ko shikayat, jumeraat tak unit chal raha tha — proof yeh raha.”
After-sales content, especially following a public warranty complaint.
09
“Third floor install, copper piping, bracket on the wall.”
“Teesri manzil pe install — copper piping, bracket deewar pe.”
Full installation clips that show what free installation actually covers.
10
“Your battery died in fourteen months. Here is what killed it.”
“Battery chaudah mahine mein khatam ho gayi — wajah yeh thi.”
Summer battery-care content aimed at repeat UPS buyers.
11
“Free installation includes this. This part costs extra.”
“Muft installation mein yeh shamil hai, aur yeh cheez alag se lagti hai.”
Setting expectations before the technician arrives and the argument starts.
12
“November. Check your gas heater before you switch it on.”
“November hai — heater chalane se pehle ek baar check karwa lein.”
First cold week, selling heater safety checks and winter servicing.
13
“One room on solar. This is the real starting cost.”
“Ek kamra solar pe — asal shuruwati kharcha yeh banta hai.”
Answering solar enquiries honestly instead of quoting a whole-house figure.
14
“Bank card plan looks cheaper. Add it up with me.”
“Bank card wala plan sasta lagta hai — mere sath jama kar ke dekhein.”
Comparing your own instalment plan against a bank's processing charges.
15
“A fridge on instalments without a bank. Ask how.”
“Bank ke baghair fridge qist pe — tareeqa poochein.”
Targeting buyers with no credit card, especially before Eid.

Using these hooks

How do I use these hooks?

Should I use them word for word?

Use the shape, change the words. These are written for electronics shops generally; the version that works is the one with your own price, your own area and your own customer's actual question in it.

Do these work in Urdu?

Several have a Roman Urdu version below, and in the twin cities that version usually performs better on TikTok and Facebook. On LinkedIn, stay in English.

Checked and updated August 2026

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